Just A Man

June 9, 2003, 5:25 am

He says I'm just a mannobody special.I'm just a mannot some big game superstar.What did I do to deserve the love of an angel like you.She smiles and tries to make him understandthat he is so much more...

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Re: Just A Man

June 10, 2003, 3:25 am

This is just beautiful, Jan.BarryWe don't see things as they are, we see things as we are. - Anais NinJoin us at the Poetry Factory. :)The Poetry Factory

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Re: Just A Man

June 10, 2003, 6:06 pm

Thank you, Barry. Glad you felt that of this piece.Jan-------------------------------------------------------------Please join me at The Poetry Factory, The Creative Writer's Lounge or view my...

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Re: Just A Man

June 11, 2003, 12:18 am

Very romantic.H.

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Re: Just A Man

June 11, 2003, 5:53 pm

Thanks Heinz. Jan-------------------------------------------------------------Please join me at The Poetry Factory, The Creative Writer's Lounge or view my personal webpage at Poems For The Heart and...

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Re: Just A Man

June 12, 2003, 9:36 pm

Almost a flavor of a shape-poem, Jan? Even with my preference for rhyme and meter, this reached me. I've stood where 'he' stands, and said as much to her.(Her reply may have omitted 'superstar'...but...

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Re: Just A Man

June 12, 2003, 9:57 pm

Thanks Eric. That you liked this is a great compliment to me. That it resembles shape poetry isn't just a coincidence. Although this one wasn't written as such, I do pay a lot of attention to visual...

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